Friday, October 26, 2012
Here you will post your essays and then you need to rate 3 other classmate's work. You are to write a short (3-4 sentence) review in the comment box under their work and rate the work 1-5 (1 being the lowest and 5 the highest). Please rate on interest, organization, style, and grammar. In order to receive full credit you must post your essay and rate at LEAST 3. Happy Writing!
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Dear,Jason
ReplyDeleteThese days I don't feel comfortable here at Maryland.My family have to move here because my dad own a carry out here now.Me,my brother James and sister Kristy had to move here to help my dad's job.I also miss my old house I used to live in that has more space but the house I'm living in now is small.Also I have to deal with going to a new school and all this stuff is stressing me out.
It happen on August,when me,James and Kristy have to pack our stuff and move from Philadelphia to Maryland which is here and we travel about 4 hours.When we arrive at Maryland we had to live in our cousins' house because the stuff in our old house isn't all packed up.Four days past as Me,James and Kristy is in our cousins' house, then later on my dad pick us up to move to the new house.I was expecting the house we live in is bigger,but it was smaller than our old house and that surprised me.We had to go to school tomorrow when we haven't even unpack our belongings.
It is morning and Me,James and Kristy have to wake up in 7am which is different because we have to wake up at 8am in our old house.It is school day and my Dad drive us to school for the first day.I was nervous before but now I'm not.Then when I went inside the school,it was big and I didn't expected that.Then I found out the school name is General James Gholson Middle School and later on I was at guidance to get my schedule so I know where to go for class.Then after each class I got homework which is a lot more than the ones I got at my old school.
Later on when its time to go home,I have to ride on bus to go home.Also the school time is longer by 30 minutes which is different.Then when I go home I was doing my homework,my Dad pick up Me, my brother and sister to the carry out.Then when we arrive we ate and watch the people work in the carry out.Also later on we went home.
After all this I grew as a person.I have to get used to this kind of pressure because when I grow up I will have a job.Also all this stuff teach me to be more a responsible person.I am really learning after all this event.Bye future self I have a great time talking to you.
From.Jason
Nice story whats the name of the carry out ???????
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